
Sea level blow out
Broken pieces left behind
Dark sea to reclaim
Inspired by Mark Bialczak’s *great line:
Momentary slip
*Flop forever lost its flip
Soft flesh, sand and grip
Flip has lost its flop
That unmistakable pop
Shoe about to drop
In response to the Weekly Photo Challenge: Broken
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I am a scientist by trade and artist by soul. My creative outlet used to be dancing but due to injuries and age, I must now find another path. I am hoping my writing, poetry and photography can be this new path.
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May 22, 2015 at 4:02 pm
I love it, Christy. The flop that has forever lost its flip.
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May 22, 2015 at 4:16 pm
Ha, what a great line!
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May 22, 2015 at 4:21 pm
Your photo inspired me. 🙂
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May 22, 2015 at 4:30 pm
I like both photo and haiku.
janet
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May 22, 2015 at 4:39 pm
Thank you!
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May 22, 2015 at 4:43 pm
Yo, take another look!
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May 23, 2015 at 1:30 am
Haiku times two. What a team we make, Christy. Soles intertwined. 🙂
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May 23, 2015 at 2:41 am
The defunct thong. Love the poetry. A great broken.
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May 23, 2015 at 6:42 am
Mark, you’re killin’ me!
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May 23, 2015 at 6:43 am
Irene,thank you! I’m just glad it wasn’t the “other” kind of thong. You never know what you’ll find on the beach on a holiday weekend.
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May 23, 2015 at 10:03 am
So good and soo true. Brings back memories of my shoes popping very far from my house……
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May 23, 2015 at 10:15 am
That sounds like a not so fun experience!
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May 24, 2015 at 3:09 am
Haha! I hadn’t even thought of that kind. It doesn’t bear thinking about.
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May 24, 2015 at 7:22 am
You are right. That is not a story I would care to write about – unless it was a comedy.
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May 28, 2015 at 8:31 pm
Interesting take on the topic here. 🙂
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May 28, 2015 at 8:44 pm
Thank you!
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