Pattering of rain
Unfurling tender young leaves
Painting blooming buds
Misty mountain air
The solitude of silence
Meditating monk
River of steelhead
Race against a summer breeze
She gasps her last breath
Seeds scattered on snow
Sparrows flit with excitement
Against a blue sky
Challenge:
Chèvrefeuille has listed twelve (12) words, one word for every hour. The goal is to write haiku using the words as given in the clockwise way.
Here are the twelve (12) words, one word for every hour you have to use for the challenge:
1. rain
2. young leaves
3. buds
4. mountain
5. silence
6. monk
7. river
8. summer breeze
9. she
10. snow
11. sparrow (s)
12. blue sky
In response to CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Full Circle #2-2016
The challenge ends October 27th at 10.00 PM (CET). Please check out the link if you want to respond to the challenge and to read the participants beautiful responses.
October 21, 2016 at 6:07 pm
Beautiful! The photograph is incredible! As is the poem! :))
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October 21, 2016 at 6:23 pm
Thank you in cahoots!
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October 21, 2016 at 6:41 pm
My pleasure! 😊
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October 22, 2016 at 9:28 am
All of these are well done. Great use of “she.”
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October 22, 2016 at 9:36 am
Thank you Rivrlogr. I struggled with that one. I couldn’t figure out how to use “she” without it being at the beginning so I made it work as best I could. I loved what you did using it mid-phrase.
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October 22, 2016 at 9:43 am
🙂
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