They shared everything
All their deepest, darkest secrets
He knew her restless nature
Gave her the freedom she craved
But now he no longer joined her
The ever voice of reason
Always pulled him back
Back to his world of numbers
Their tangible trust an imperative
Boundaries understood between them
It was no one else’s business
They had once shared a love
For both numbers and passion
But tragedy had rubbed her raw
Numbers no longer satisfied
Only passion mattered now
Her aperture wide open
A pinpoint focus
Of fine detail
All nerve endings and feel
His aperture closed down
To see the bigger picture
All detail lost and numb
In the static of every day
She came to realize
He could not give her
What she had always given
That transition from trust to faith
Intangible faith with no boundaries
Faith that the garden is still there
Even when out of focus
The context lost in bokeh
And so they saw the world
From different perspectives
Both trying to focus
Both looking for clarity
Both looking for the light
With no right answers
And no wrong answers
Just two people
Trying to find their way
In response to Patrick Jennings Pic and a Word Challenge #12: Faith and
Jennifer Nicole Wells One Word Photo Challenge: Aperture and
the Weekly Photo Challenge: Transition
November 28, 2015 at 9:44 pm
“That transition from trust to faith.” Love those words.
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November 28, 2015 at 9:47 pm
Thank you. I’m glad I was able to communicate the difference.
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November 28, 2015 at 11:20 pm
“Just two people”. Beautiful.
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November 28, 2015 at 11:24 pm
Thank you Desley.
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November 29, 2015 at 2:01 am
An excellent analogy. To be a bit prosaic, it reminded me of a trip to a steam railway with a friend in the 1960s. All my shots were close-ups of brass and wood; all his were long shots of the yards.
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November 29, 2015 at 5:06 am
Thank you Derrick.
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November 29, 2015 at 2:57 pm
Photo is beautiful and the poem is great. It was like a journey through a relationship!
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November 29, 2015 at 2:57 pm
Thank you kindly.
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December 1, 2015 at 11:58 am
One of the. Let interesting poems I have read in a very long time! Great play on words and nice flow – really enjoyed your clever combo of the challenges too – 😊
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December 1, 2015 at 12:30 pm
Thank you kindly!
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December 1, 2015 at 3:42 pm
So very gorgeous.
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December 1, 2015 at 4:39 pm
Thank you!
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December 1, 2015 at 6:28 pm
👍😊
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December 9, 2015 at 10:49 am
Very powerful and moving. It is amazing the effect mere words can have sometimes, isn’t it?
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December 9, 2015 at 11:24 am
Yes, words are very powerful. They can express our deepest thoughts and secrets. They can give a glimmer of a person’s soul.
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