Dancing Echoes

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Falling Water



Ground gently vibrates
Thundering waterfall plume
Cool mist beads on skin

In response to CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #14 Sense Switching or Synesthesia

Author: Dancing Echoes

I am a scientist by trade and artist by soul. My creative outlet used to be dancing but due to injuries and age, I must now find another path. I am hoping my writing, poetry and photography can be this new path. Awards: While I am grateful and honored for the numerous nominations, I don’t have time to respond to them with the attention they deserve, so for the most part, I am an award free blog. All photographs and words are mine unless otherwise credited. © 2015-2023 Dancing Echoes ALL RIGHTS RESERVED Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this blog’s author/owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Christy Draper with appropriate and specific direction to the original content on Dancing Echoes.

6 thoughts on “Falling Water

  1. Lovely haiku. It touches my senses.

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  2. Thank you! Excellent, because that was the challenge!

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  3. Reblogged this on Cheryl "Cheffie Cooks" Wiser and commented:
    Oh I just love this!!!


  4. An outdoor, impromptu shower is calling me here, Christy.

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  5. Beautiful Christy … a nicely written haiku in which the synesthesia is very clear

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  6. Thank you, I tried. Great challenge!


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