Damp remnants on sheets
Reminder of day’s past love
Gathered to my face
Warm fragrance of us lingers
Pity to wash their perfume
In response to CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #55 Jen (Blog It Or Lose It)
Damp remnants on sheets
Reminder of day’s past love
Gathered to my face
Warm fragrance of us lingers
Pity to wash their perfume
In response to CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #55 Jen (Blog It Or Lose It)
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August 4, 2015 at 7:48 pm
A pity indeed, When scent is such a potent reminder… !
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August 4, 2015 at 7:54 pm
I like smelling his shirts when he’s out of town too.
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August 4, 2015 at 9:01 pm
Aww. Sweet
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August 4, 2015 at 10:32 pm
A very erotic poem about the “wet spot’ but delicately stated in subtlety… Made me want to go home right at this moment! (Wink!)
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August 4, 2015 at 10:38 pm
Good!
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August 4, 2015 at 11:41 pm
Hmmmm! Such thoughts! Very well done.
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August 5, 2015 at 12:37 am
So refreshing to read a grown up writing about grown up love in a grown up way.
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August 5, 2015 at 1:02 am
Oh … powerful and sensual … bravo!
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August 5, 2015 at 5:15 am
Thank you!
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August 6, 2015 at 12:39 pm
Very exciting take Dancing Echoes … erotic and very sensual … ah that sweet perfume of his/her body that lingers in his/her clothing. Awesome.
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August 6, 2015 at 12:42 pm
Thank you.
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August 7, 2015 at 10:05 am
Fortunate place, that room. Here, here, DE.
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August 9, 2015 at 12:47 am
Well, as the kids would say OMG….and if that red doesn’t say romance, nothing will. I love this:)
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August 9, 2015 at 7:54 am
Thank you! I don’t know why but I have always liked red sheets. Maybe it’s because skin looks good on them -rosy instead of sallow.
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August 9, 2015 at 8:26 am
Never thought of it like that but this is true. It does add a richness all skin tones doesn’t it:)
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August 12, 2015 at 3:43 pm
Thank you!
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August 12, 2015 at 3:43 pm
Thank you for the fabulous compliment!
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