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Beats Stumbling Around in Silence

Immortality 2



The Donner’s
Pass around the energy
On a cold winter’s night

An unofficial response to CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI, Carpe Diem #702, Immortality

Author: Dancing Echoes

I am a scientist by trade and artist by soul. My creative outlet used to be dancing but due to injuries and age, I must now find another path. I am hoping my writing, poetry and photography can be this new path. Awards: While I am grateful and honored for the numerous nominations, I don’t have time to respond to them with the attention they deserve, so for the most part, I am an award free blog. All photographs and words are mine unless otherwise credited. © 2015-2023 Dancing Echoes ALL RIGHTS RESERVED Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this blog’s author/owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Christy Draper with appropriate and specific direction to the original content on Dancing Echoes.

6 thoughts on “Immortality 2

  1. Thank you! A little off color. I was afraid folks might not like my morbid sense of humor.

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  2. I love it and can’t wait to find more! Again, wonderful job.

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  3. Oh my I truly love this one…truly speaks on so many levels!

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  4. Thank you again. I almost didn’t post because of it’s dark nature. My husband thought it was too morbid. But this is life is it not?


  5. This IS life and the darker the poem, the more I am attracted to it. Life is filled with sadness and that is how we treasure happy times.

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