Darkness of night, the fading of light,
Eternity may be illusion, not a foregone conclusion,
And all that we fear, when the end is so near,
That our last breath on earth, will it lead to rebirth?
Holding on, to all that we trust, the cosmos are certain, we all turn to dust.
Photo courtesy of Pixabay
Inspired by the Writing 201 Prompt: Trust
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I am a scientist by trade and artist by soul. My creative outlet used to be dancing but due to injuries and age, I must now find another path. I am hoping my writing, poetry and photography can be this new path.
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February 18, 2015 at 4:20 pm
Wow, this is quite beautiful.
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February 18, 2015 at 4:25 pm
Thank you. I really struggled with this one.
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February 18, 2015 at 5:13 pm
That is stunning! Thank you.
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February 18, 2015 at 5:22 pm
Thank you!
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February 18, 2015 at 6:03 pm
Such a satisfying read, it has great rhythm and flows so well, and yet has a lovely message too. Well done!
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February 18, 2015 at 6:29 pm
Thank you kindly.
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February 18, 2015 at 7:47 pm
Your five line acrostic is very deep and philosophical! It ponders the big question of life after death, and ends with the truth that our physical bodies return to dust. Very nicely done 🙂
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February 18, 2015 at 7:49 pm
Thank you!
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February 18, 2015 at 9:24 pm
Amazing and you even have the stressed words. brilliant
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February 18, 2015 at 9:41 pm
Thank you, I appreciate your kind words.
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February 18, 2015 at 10:27 pm
Beautiful picture of the cosmos and the words flow nicely.
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February 18, 2015 at 10:29 pm
Thank you.
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February 20, 2015 at 5:05 pm
From one kindred spirit to another, this is beautiful and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Clare
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February 20, 2015 at 5:38 pm
Thank you!
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March 1, 2015 at 10:03 pm
Yes, I found it very moving…beautiful work…
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March 1, 2015 at 10:08 pm
Thank you. I am am looking at your site now. Nice work.
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